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Alexandra and Leo! by YaoiMeowmaster Alexandra and Leo! by YaoiMeowmaster
Meet Alexandra Rivers and Leo Bloom, protagonists of my upcoming comic series in development, Tap All!

Tap All! is a series following the lives of 6 gifted children, along with an assortment of other talented characters. Tap All! is largely an action/adventure shonen piece with themes revolving around family, racism and war. At its subplot, there are also hints of romantic comedy. 

Be sure to watch me for more updates on the characters or if you're just plain interested.

Critique Desired</span>
Thank you all so much for the critique. You were so helpful and kind at the same time, I'm so happy! :iconcryforeverplz: 
:icondanadani:
Ah,this is adorable!Your cartoony style is so cute~:heart:I don't know why,but they remind me of a human version from Petunia and Flaky from Happy Tree Friends.
First of all,I love their expressions:The girl seem excited and tries to make the little boy feel the same,but he's a bit shy.
I like the shading.If it's cartoony style,it's excellent!Now I've become interested in your future comics.
About anatomy:I only have three small complaints.The girl's hands seem a bit too scrawny down from the elbow(I hope I said the word right),the boy's left hand seems too little compared to his other hand and his right leg seems a little too thin.
The composition is good,I have no problem with it.:)
This was all,I hope you'll like my critique.:D
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Oh what a great drawing !
This is so colorful <3 That's really what it caught my eyes at first sight, so much colors and colors who matches together :3

And more than that the shading and lightning is just very good.
Expression are so lovelies :3
It's very nice to see it's beautiful : ) And the clothing is very perfect.

I really think thoses characters would fit a comic or a BD (don't know what word you use :3) very well ! There are sister and brother ?
Anyway, just a background would make it better, but either than that i love it very well :3
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CondemnedInfamy Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
alexandra is a pretty name
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