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Meet Alexandra Rivers and Leo Bloom, protagonists of my upcoming comic series in development, Tap All!
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Tap All! is a series following the lives of 6 gifted children, along with an assortment of other talented characters. Tap All! is largely an action/adventure shonen piece with themes revolving around family, racism and war. At its subplot, there are also hints of romantic comedy.
Be sure to watch me for more updates on the characters or if you're just plain interested.
Thank you all so much for the critique. You were so helpful and kind at the same time, I'm so happy! 
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactI love the fact that this style somehow reminds me of Pokemon in a way! Pretty cool piece of art. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> but of course, there's always something that needs improvement!I'll start off with the anatomy, it needs a lot of work and practice, but overall you seem to be getting the hang of it. Shading, I think the shading is the one that needs to be fixed since it's in very odd places, like the hair on the boy for example should probably have a lot more shading, that way we can see and feel the flow of the hair.
And for the line-art...can't really say much about that, I think it looks fine! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="
" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>